Sunday, 9 May 2021

100 Word Challenge

  100 Word Challenge…


…suddenly, darkness enveloped the room


People cried their last tears well pitch black would curse the walls “HELP HELP US PLEASE” but for their conser nobody would go in to save them nobody even heard them... then a strange figure came up it rose it had red skin but before they could look up to its face “uuuu gghhhhhhhhhhhhh” to the ground nobody could take a step up they all lied flat on the floor there heart was pounding they needed to take a breath but they were flat faced onto the pitch black ground then it turned red the ground stated to crack? But for the people they were terrified then the ground broke they fell and nobody ever saw them again
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1 comment:

  1. Philiprip12 May 2021 at 02:45

    Faliha, you need to think about what we have talked about with your writing this week. This is just a jumble of ideas all squashed in together. I know you can use full stops and commas to keep the ideas separated apart.

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